As the pages progressed, I think I “fell” into the art style more, but I still didn’t like how rushed it felt.

I’ve seen this a few times in my life, the runner who smokes.

This guy has -like- no underlying facial structure.

Gosh I would research the hell out of this location today…

This is another of those hard to see pages.

I tried to hide his eyes in the last 2 panels. But I really hate my anatomy here.

I was too young to be telling this story when I tried to.

A lot of this comic is hard to see to me. I don’t know if I would redraw it or have someone else redraw it.

This zoom in was inspired by the opening page of Watchmen.

My original plan for NonPersons was to have all of these different art styles come together in a grand display at the end, but life got in the way of me finishing the story. This first chapter, while I like the pacing and structure, I was never a fan of my linework here. It was always rough and ugly to me.