Because the art is so rushed is why this comic is way down here at the bottom of the page.

I like the panel where the cigarette falls.

I like the reveal of her skin color here because of the black and white nature of the comic.

A lot of the art was done with micron quickly scratched on and then the heavy lines done in sharpie. The snow was done digitally.

I tried to get across here that they are wearing clothes for survival while she is wearing clothes for fashion.

This is one page that is starting to come together with how I was using panels. It’s a basic 9 panel grid for NonPersons. I thought limiting myself to the structure would be good for me.

As the pages progressed, I think I “fell” into the art style more, but I still didn’t like how rushed it felt.

I’ve seen this a few times in my life, the runner who smokes.

This guy has -like- no underlying facial structure.

Gosh I would research the hell out of this location today…